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'Itís all over'


Everything is so unfair
Nobody even cares

Itís like her life is over
Hoping her life would end sooner

Everything is wrong
She canít find where she belongs

Wishing to end her life of sorrow
Hoping there wouldnít be a tomorrow

She never had a real friend
They all just pretend

She canít take it anymore
She fell on the floor

She killed herself with a knife
She ended her own life

She no longer needs to suffer
Now that her life is over
i wrote this when i was mad so i'm not really sure...well, i had no help in making this poem again :) please comment!!! :excited:
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2005
reminds me of my poem, [link] , any hu, i likies!
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an-usher-fan Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2005
i never read that poem :giggle: lol kinda proves that loads of ppl use the suicide subject a lot for their poems ^_^ like my sister's poem ---> [link] , i've also read others that had the same subject as both of us did :) anyway, thanks a lot for the fave and the comment! :hug:
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2005
no prob,i agree
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an-usher-fan Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2005
:hug:
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:iconbabyxxxkat:
babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2005
hummmmmmmmmmm, eminem, or usher, i cant chose! there both yummy!
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atrappedlonelysoul Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2005   Writer
Eminem! :love: say he's number one or this cookie gets it ... 'a :cookie: + a :hungry: person = me eating teh cookie :chew: :mwahaha:'
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babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2005
lol, i lov em both, hey how bouts a threesome with them both!
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atrappedlonelysoul Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2005   Writer
gawd...that'd be awesome...:drool: i'm so there X3
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:iconbabyxxxkat:
babyxxxkat Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2005
lol
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:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
atrappedlonelysoul Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2005   Writer
XD yep, weirdness runs in the family...**looks at her sister** yep, it really does o.o;
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