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'Itís all over'


Everything is so unfair
Nobody even cares

Itís like her life is over
Hoping her life would end sooner

Everything is wrong
She canít find where she belongs

Wishing to end her life of sorrow
Hoping there wouldnít be a tomorrow

She never had a real friend
They all just pretend

She canít take it anymore
She fell on the floor

She killed herself with a knife
She ended her own life

She no longer needs to suffer
Now that her life is over
i wrote this when i was mad so i'm not really sure...well, i had no help in making this poem again :) please comment!!! :excited:
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:iconbabyxxxkat:
reminds me of my poem, [link] , any hu, i likies!
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:iconan-usher-fan:
i never read that poem :giggle: lol kinda proves that loads of ppl use the suicide subject a lot for their poems ^_^ like my sister's poem ---> [link] , i've also read others that had the same subject as both of us did :) anyway, thanks a lot for the fave and the comment! :hug:
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:iconbabyxxxkat:
hummmmmmmmmmm, eminem, or usher, i cant chose! there both yummy!
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:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
Eminem! :love: say he's number one or this cookie gets it ... 'a :cookie: + a :hungry: person = me eating teh cookie :chew: :mwahaha:'
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:iconbabyxxxkat:
lol, i lov em both, hey how bouts a threesome with them both!
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:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
gawd...that'd be awesome...:drool: i'm so there X3
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:iconatrappedlonelysoul:
XD yep, weirdness runs in the family...**looks at her sister** yep, it really does o.o;
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